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03/14/2024 “Young Poetry”   Leave a comment

I’m a fan of some poetry. That being said I prefer short poetry like haikus or limericks. What I like even more is poetry written by younger children because it seems they write what they’re feeling and that makes it special. In the past I’ve posted poems from younger children collected from English-speaking countries around the world and today I offer four more excellent examples of their work. Their poetry is alarmingly good for their young ages and today’s topic will be Feelings. Enjoy!

By Paul Wollner – Age 7 – United States

I love you, Big World.

I wish I could call you

And tell you a secret:

That I love you, World.

*****

By Mary Flett – Age 9 – New Zealand

A loving arm

Shelters me

From any harm.

That shelteredness

Of kindness

Flows around me.

*****

By Ngaire Noffke – Age 12 – New Zealand

I shook his hand.

I touched him.

How proud I felt.

He said “Hello” softly.

I lost my voice,

But in my mind

I said everything.

*****

by Karen Crawford – Age 9 – United States

Have you ever felt like nobody?

Just a tiny speck of air.

When everyone’s around you,

And you are just not there.

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THANKS ONCE AGAIN TO RICHARD LEWIS

01/06/2024 “Child Poets at Work”   2 comments

“Poetry is to prose as dancing is to walking.”

by John Wain

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As I worked my way slowly through the public school system back in the 1960’s I received little or no information or exposure to poetry. It was mentioned in passing in some classes but there never was any serious time devoted to it. It just seems to me that making some poetry (not just the classics) available to younger students might just motivate them to either read more poetry or to write their own. A gentlemen named Richard Lewis, a lecturer on children’s literature and creative writing, apparently agreed with me. In cooperation with UNESCO, he traveled through eighteen English speaking countries around the world collecting poetry written by children between the ages of five and thirteen. Three thousand poems were collected with the best 200 published in his book, “Miracles” published in 1966. I’ve picked out two samples to give you some idea of just how talented many of the youngsters can be when expressing their thoughts in a poetic fashion.

THUNDER

by Glenys Van Every, Age 9, Australia

I hear

the drummers

strike

the sky.

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SUMMER

by Margaret Bendig, Age 10, United States

Inviting, rippling waters

Waiting for little toes

Hurry, go get changed!

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After reading a few pages of these poems I had a minor epiphany. These children were not trained in poetry but as they wrote their poems many of them began to look very much like free-verse haiku’s. Having no set restrictions on the length of lines and syllable counting allows the young poets freedom to truly express themselves. 

Of course, being the irreverent SOB that I am I decided to write this haiku of mine and take it down a road not normally traveled. It contains some reference to nature but also just a touch of my humor. It’s a poetic mortal sin to write them this way and I’m sure it will tweak the noses of a few people. It’s always fun at times to make some people a little crazy.

*❤️*

NATURAL

by Me, Age: Old

Out of the corner of my eye

A bird sails quietly by.

A flash of golden sunlight,

And I have bird shit on my thigh.

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SMILE, I DID INCLUDE SOME NATURE

12/30/2023 “GOODBYE 2023”   Leave a comment

“Resolution in a bad cause is called stubbornness; stubbornness in a good cause is called resolution.”

Anonymous

Well, here I quietly sit trying to decompress from another Christmas season. I just completed my two and a half months’ worth of humor primarily to see if the response to the humor posts was as good or equal to my standard blogging techniques. The increase was minor which tells me many things but that will have to wait for another day. Just so you know, it would probably bore you to tears.

My plan going forward for 2024 is to do a few weeks of poetry. Some of you will enjoy that thoroughly and others will say “what the hell are you doing?” I get that poetry is not something everyone likes, and I understand that completely. I’ve tried to read as much poetry as I could over the years and truthfully the great majority of it was disappointing. It’s not that poetry isn’t interesting; it just wasn’t interesting to me. I’ve come to realize that my favorite poems are short, sweet, and something that forces the reader to use their imagination. That eventually led me to haikus. For me to enjoy poetry it has to be less than three stanzas long. Even that’s a little much for me that’s why I find haiku’s so interesting. So, I suppose January is going to consist of short and meaningful poetry taken from many famous poets, some of my own, and some of yours if you choose to offer it up to be posted. I’ll also throw in a host of limericks of all flavors just for fun. I hope you’ll enjoy what I’m trying to do here, maybe you will and maybe you won’t. 

But before we start January, I need to deal with some other business relating to 2024. That is my New Year’s resolutions. In the past I’ve usually listed ten and completed at most six or seven. I try to make them humorous because most people don’t take them all that serious anyway. This year I’ll list just five, maybe that will motivate me to complete a higher percentage. Here they are:

READ MORE THAN 100 BOOKS

TRY TO BE A LITTLE FRIENDLIER TOWARDS THE REST OF THE WORLD

KEEP DUNKIN’ EXPENDITURES TO LESS THAN $40.00 A MONTH

COMPLETE EIGHT PAINTINGS OR PRINTS

LEARN AT LEAST FOUR NEW CUSS WORDS FROM MY GRANDSONS

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“Resolve to perform what you ought; perform without fail what you resolve.”

Ben Franklin

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There you have it. Maybe I’ll accomplish them all for a change (chances are slim and none) but I’ll keep trying. It’s always fun to look back at previous years to confirm just how bad you are about being successful.

HAPPY NEW YEAR